Landing Page fixes

 Eliminate the For Players parents coaches   at the top    better to have logo up there

The headings  from the original website in the original order need to be restored  missing entire sections with what you ahve up there

 

Instead of THE it should be AN in Em intel program for comp tennis players

 

Take out the text starting with Tennis Trains Strokes...   too crowded for Landing Page   keep look clean

 

What is FBTL section looks good   will improve images as we go to final version

 

Take out SEE from and change to    How FBTL Works   

The text below that should read simply       The First Ball To Last Program Explained

 

Need to redesign the Testimonial section   its looks cheesy and added on...  and there are typos in it  don't need the 5 star thing   just better images of the players and their quotes  lets get them all on the page   .we have one that needs to be scrolled to get to

 

The section below with the text can be removed   redundant and wordy   

Better Emotional Skills. Better Tennis Experience. Better Life Skills.

 

Built by Barry Buss   should read    Meet FBTL Creator Barry Buss   I have author photo I will send over eventually

 

Lets start with this    

    

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